Moving

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This bit of flash fiction is under 300 words, which would take the average reader under a minute to read.

Vale stacked another box onto the pile developing in the kitchen. No, not Vale. Marin. He still couldn't get used to the new name, but he would have to.

The next room over, movers dropped the couch against the wrong wall. He'd told them, even taped notes to where the furniture should go, and they still got it wrong. Vale wouldn't stand for this. Vale would fire them on the spot and hire someone competent. But Vale also wouldn't live in such a miserable flat, or own such an ugly couch.

What would Marin do? Marin only existed because Vale fucked up and pissed off the wrong people. Maybe Marin should try not pissing people off.

“That's the last of it,” the boss mover said as he placed the final chair at the table. He took out a tablet and tapped a few buttons before presenting it. “Our invoice. Will you be paying by cash, card, or check?”

Marin balked at the amount due present on the screen in front of him. “That's not what I was quoted for this!”

“The furniture was heavier than expected.”

Heat rose to Marin's face. His fists clenched, ready to strike. This is unacceptable! Vale screamed in his head. The fee ate too much into the meagre starting funds he was given.

Marin swallowed the growing anger. He existed because of Vale and his mistakes. He couldn't let those mistakes be his end, too.

He pulled out his wallet and counted out the bills. “Here,” he said through gritted teeth and forced smile. “And some extra as a tip.”

Whatever person Marin was to be, if he was to survive, Vale had to die.



Cover image: by Martina Stokow (edits by Rin Garnett)

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Author's Notes

This flash fiction piece was written in May, 2024, in response to a prompt during a local writing meetup. The prompt was to write about moving to a new place, which made me think of fresh starts and dramatic reasons why someone might need one.


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